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NEW Part to my story!!!!!!!!!!!! it's been a while since i've been able to write, but i was able to get a little bit more of the story fleshed out! I dont' know if you guys remember the whole story so far so i'll put the whole thing up (also i had to edit that a bit more, too so it's slightly different). keep in mind that this is very much a roughdraft and may be subject to change, so please don't kill me on the grammar, but i'd love to see what you think, so comment away!!! hope you like it.... Outside the bar in the small pioneer town of El Paso, a weary, weather-beaten rider ties his horse near a trough of water. Inside the bar was midnight compared to the glaring sun outside. When the rider first stepped in, nothing was visible except for the mirror behind the bartender in the back, which mimicked the rays of the sun outside like a spotlight shining back towards the door. Once he adjusted to what little light there was, he walked towards the bar and sat down. By the time he did, everyone, except for a few too drunk to care, was looking to see who this stranger was. Curious, too, the bartender walked to the bar, “Whadd’le ya have?” he asked the man while picking up a glass and wiping it clean with a bar rag which had been used countless times before for the same purpose and was beginning to show it. “Shot ‘a whiskey an’ some ‘a whatever meat you got.” Said the man “We ain’t got no meat,” the bartender said while pouring the man’s whiskey, “but you can get some from tha gen’ral store down tha road there.” He pointed out towards the dirt road the man had just come in from. “Thanks” the stranger said, downed his shot, and sat glass down on the bar along with money for the drink. He began to get up… Click “Why you gotta leave so soon? You just got here, why don’t you g’on ‘n sit back down?” said a woman from behind as she pressed the muzzle of a revolver to the back of his head, forcing him to retake his seat. “I paid you back, Stella, why are you doin’ this?” asked the man “I know you done paid me back-“ She said while leaning in close enough for him to see her face. The mirror, being the only source of light in the bar, cast harsh shadows across her face, making her long, dark hair, the edge of her tan cheek, and one eye, blue and as cold as Winter herself visible to him, the rest of her face lost in darkness. “-You see, I ain’t here ‘bout your debts an’ you know it.” She said, her lips close enough to caress his ear as she spoke. She considered kissing him- No. Don’t let old feelings get in the way- She thought, her attention reclaimed by the task at hand. “Where is it?” She asked. “Where’s what?” He responded, frustration slanting his speech. “C’mon John, don’t
try ‘n play games with me-“ leaning in closer “-you already had your chance at
that…”
SOMETHING NEW!!!ok, i'm really sorry for not putting up anything for a long time, and i hope i can make it up by putting this out here now. It's the beginning of a story that i'm writing and i hope you like it. Now if things work out like i'm hoping, this story will unfold in little chapters on here as i get the chance to write and put it up here, so here it goes... (sorry i dont' have a title yet, but it will come in time)
Outside the bar in the small pioneer town of El Paso, a weary, weather-beaten rider ties his horse near a trough of water. Inside the bar was midnight compared to the glaring sun outside. When the rider first stepped in, nothing was visible except for the mirror behind the bartender in the back, which mimicked the rays of the sun outside like a spotlight shining back towards the door. Once he adjusted to what little light there was, he walked towards the bar and sat down. By the time he did, everyone, except for a few too drunk to care, was looking to see who this stranger was. Curious, too, the bartender walks to the bar, “Whadd’le ya have?” he asks the man while picking up a glass and wiping it clean with a bar rag which had been used countless times before for the same purpose and was beginning to show it. “Shot ‘a whiskey an’ some ‘a whatever meat you got.” Said the man “We ain’t got no meat,” the bartender said while pouring the man’s whiskey, “but you can get some from tha gen’ral store down tha road there.” Pointing out towards the dirt road the man had just come in from. A drunk man, with a face scarred and dark from many years of driving cattle to and from the market in far away San Antonio, leans over towards the man, “Don’t get many a’ your kind passin’ through here.” “Whadda’ya mean, Jim?” asks another man off in the corner of the shadowed room, probably playing poker at the table he is at. (to be continued…) crap...Its Summer again, and that's great, i mean no school and no annoying projects to get in my way of doing practically nothing for a while... BUT... summer means that i'm not working for school, and, like i said, that means no projects to get in my way which means that anyone who is still reading this or will soon start to again, will be expecting something... so i guess i'll start thinking and get back to you in a little bit. Untill i've gotten that done, please enjoy my new picture album. heypray for the people down at virginia tech right now, i couldn't imagine what they must be dealing with. that poem you've been hearing so much aboutThe Rush
Thoughts through the mind, As adrenaline through blood, Straining to find, Words to mix thought with lead, Scratching words on, Paper with rushed confusion, To not forget, A word of this "delusion", More hurried scratch, Brings more of this thought to life, Like a lit match, Beginning to bring forth light, Ideas begin, They begin to shine through, Breaking darkness... |
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